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Pariah oF Never

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: From The Arms of Our Fathers

    Hello! I'm not very good with these critiques. But, I really loved this! I wish there was a way to hear the songs with music or with someone singing it. ...

    Feb 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: :DGood Morning Sun

    Hello! I though this was such a happy poem. For the record it may not have made me laugh out loud, but it did make me smile :D Not much ...

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re:

    Hi The critic before me already talked about grammar problems (which is good because I'm not very good at correcting grammar). However, I do agree with him or her in ...

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Boy Who Thought He Was a Tree

    Wow. That was really great. It had such an apathetic (creepy) tone but it carried soooo much emotion. Seriously I loved it. It gave me chills. I'm trying to wrap ...

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Fission - [Edited]

    Wow. This is very intriguing. I like how the prologue is told from an unusual point of view. I'm not exactly sure who (or what) is telling this story. This ...

    Nov 26, 2009


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